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New Post 2009/01/20 02:48 PM
User is offline Nico Redelinghuys
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Poetry 

I feel I should share this. My dream is to get published sometime soon but in the meantime your comments and critique will be greatly appreciated.


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New Post 2009/01/20 02:49 PM
User is offline Nico Redelinghuys
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Re: Poetry 

what this is not

 

This poem

- illustrated and decorated,

beautified by my own pen –

was not written for you.

 

It is not meant

as an attack

- not insulting,

derogatory,

sharp or insensitive.

 

This is not a

“literary wonder,”

an elegy

or a sonnet of sorts.

 

But it is definitely

            not

an ode either.

 

Deal with it.

Sunday,  24 February, 2002


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New Post 2009/01/20 02:50 PM
User is offline Nico Redelinghuys
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Re: Poetry 
Modified By Nico Redelinghuys  on 2009/01/20 02:54:36 PM)

Poem for WOMD

 

i could fall for you
WOMD...

i could break my neck in that fall

i could stumble over pebbles and
stub my toes and
could even hit my head on
a tree or
walk into a lamppost

but i will never
ever
admit it to your face


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New Post 2009/01/20 02:53 PM
User is offline Nico Redelinghuys
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Re: Poetry 

Portrait of a Lady

 

A lady never staggers

stumbles or mumbles.

A lady is never uncouth.

She wears an air of grace,

of solitary beauty

and never drinks, but sips from her cup.

 

A lady steps out elegantly

and enters with sweet charm,

and she will always be

truthfully sincere.

 

When a lady smiles

the ocean must calm itself

and when she cries

a river shall nestle her sorrow -

and all this she does

without considering herself

but always the fortune of others.

 

A lady touches hearts,

mends souls

and comforts nations;

she is never selfish

and always worthy of praise.

 

A lady is never shallow

and never profound;

her children adore her

and her man

is ready with both arms to hold her,


even when she is able to stand on her own.

 

A lady, my dear,

is born.

Her ways are not learnt

from books or from pamphlets

yet her education is decent enough

to communicate with others.

 

This is the portrait of a lady:

She paints herself

without effort

and with great skill

granted by the Almighty.

Thursday, 11 October, 2001


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New Post 2009/01/21 10:29 AM
User is offline Ammon
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Re: Poetry 

A poet in our midst, getting published can be a daunting task, I've been there and it's very stressful, good luck, I'm not going to critique on the poetry itself, I'm not exactly an artistic person, and poetry often elludes me.


"Life's journey is not to arrive at the end safely in a well preserved body, but rather to slide in sideways totally worn out shouting, "holy sh*t...what a ride!"
 
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